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Friday 8 November 2013

my Story about the conjuring

Orientation: One day there live a family name hemara family they move to america. After that when they undo their boxes of stuff all the sisters were playing hide and clap but lisa was in she was scared because she felt something touching her, she told her sister’s that something was touching her while she was playing hide and clap. Mum (Amber) told them that it is dinner time so the sisters came for dinner. And after when they finish their dinner they were on there way to bed.


 Problem:
The next day Emma (the little sister) found a box and when you the music stop you see a little boy wants to be your friend but when Amber had a look Emma give her mum a fright she was really scared. When the kids came from kids they were hide and clap again. But Amy ( the older sister) was in so she had to call out the numbers for them to clap, After that it was time for them to go to bed one night Amy was asleep and Amy felt something pulling her legs and she thought that was her older sister was pulling her legs but there were no one there. When she went back to sleep she felt something pulling her again but there were no one there again but she saw a black shadow on the wall.

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

I love your Narrative it is so descriptive I love how you made it up it's so Imaging to me.

Next time add some more figurative language and use lot's of your imagining next time okay.

Nice Work Keep It Up !! :)

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